<Remix>Shadow of a Flower Remix

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<Remix>Shadow of a Flower Remix

Postby randomblockfilms » 10 May 2012 22:13



lol this is pretty bad. as in like it doesn't sound too good. except for 0:48-1:00 i like that part quite a bit. :P and this is my first remix of a song. ok dats it.
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Re: <Remix>Shadow of a Flower Remix

Postby Ed Viper » 10 May 2012 22:30

0.0 holy cow. This is awesome.

I don't know what you're talking about haha this is totally sick! It's songs like these that make me want to get better at music production. There's a whole lot going on, but it doesn't ruin the song since it all goes together nicely! I LIKE IT!

Okay, done gushing over this song now. :D *squee*

EDIT: The thing at the end... still cool.
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Re: <Remix>Shadow of a Flower Remix

Postby randomblockfilms » 11 May 2012 15:36

ahah thanks. i actually do kind of like this song but only like the first 1:40. the rest is messing around and repeated stuff. it has very little resemblance of Shadow of a Flower. lol

and im glad someone saw the very end :D
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Re: <Remix>Shadow of a Flower Remix

Postby bartekko » 12 May 2012 11:57

The chopping in the very beginning could use something more, like a very quiet pad to make Josh sound a bit less raw. then...
I really like it, up to...
1:48, where something happened, and the following fewty seconds sound like you made them while drunk.
also, Vocals could be louder.

3:02 Is damn awesome though,
This is better than a lot of stuff I made.
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Re: <Remix>Shadow of a Flower Remix

Postby randomblockfilms » 12 May 2012 18:20

@kyoga glad you done like it! i can see how the beginning can throw you off beat. ive just been listing so many times while working on it that i just got kind of used to it. a slight oversight. oooooooooayayaydydyaydyadada lol

@bartekko yeah the beginning does sound a bit raw now that you mentioned it. but yeah, guess i just got used to it. and i totally agree wif you about 1:48. i really did care too much for what it sounded like. i could have put some effort into it but i didn't. i iz lazy.

and 3:02 is kind of cool sounding. but i can't take all the credit. just made some intruments, threw on Josh's MIDI's, added sum background pad/noises things and a lead saw that does some stuffz. so yeahhhhhhh thanks for teh listening!
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