[Pony][Original][WIP] Abandoned - Feedback Extremely Welcome

[Conduit]

I just finished the instrumental for one of my first real song. I'm pretty new to this so there has to be something I'm doing horribly wrong. Feedback please?

EDIT: It may be hard to find the pony in this track since thats the job of the lyrics (which have yet to be recorded). I just want some critique on the instrumental to see if anything really stands out as something that needs to be changed before I record the vocals.

http://soundcloud.com/flatflish/abandoned-instrumental

[vladnuke]

Well, theres nothing too wrong, a couple discordant notes in the first bridge (that might be what you're goong for) but overall I'd really need to hear the vocals to make any assesment. It's a nice, mellow backing track.

[Conduit]

Thanks, I'll get to adding the vocals as soon as possible.