<non-pony><loop><needs critique>Hiphop Cannon

[colortwelve]

Lately, I've been making more loops than actual tracks. Damn me and my knowing more rappers than singers!

But anyway, I literally just threw this together today, as per the request of a classmate of mine, but I wanted to show it to you guys and see if it needs more touching up (which I don't doubt it does).

What I personally like about it is that it gave me a chance to start learning loop slicing, and the sound design for this one was pretty fun too. And I'm not just saying that because I tried to emulate Bassnectar's over-the-top sub.

http://soundcloud.com/colortwelve/hiphop-cannon

[the4thImpulse]

I really like the work with the panning in this loop, it gives it a huge sense of space. I think the snare is slightly too loud and the kick slightly too soft, not much else I can say about it.