<PONY><Crazy Twilight> Watch Me Lose It, Critique? PLEASE?

[GHO5T_Official]

So I made this song, another song, and three video's yesterday.... I'm Tired.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fSogT_Yrwfo

[Maniac Shelve]

I really did not like that main synth at first... but it grew on me.
Also, I lol'd so hard at 3:20.

[GHO5T_Official]

I really did not like that main synth at first... but it grew on me.
Also, I lol'd so hard at 3:20.

Well the main synth is just my style, thats not going away, and 3:20? is that the princess clara part?

[itroitnyah]

its.. umm... ok, I guess. =\ can't really say much, other then the synth is good, but at the uprising action at around 1:20 I was expecting a huge bass drop or something. The bouncy sound doesn't fit.

[Thirteen]

I dunno man, it sounds... lacking. Something, I dunno. It's like, it's just quiet percussion and synth. No bass, no real backing melodies for the most part. It feels empty I guess is what I'm trying to say.