Decent track, some different vocal styling, is english your primary language?, doesn't sound like it but isn't bad use of it as that's hard to do. Nice dubstep use with the orchestral. If this is a first track its pretty good (ends pretty abruptly fyi).
There's an introduction thread here you'll want to say hi and tell us about yourself.
Indeed it isnt my main language and no it isnt my first track but. I just started 2 months ago, with music so~ And thanks i will checkout the welcome site.