<pony><original>Flight Lesson

[Penumbrah]

This is my very fist attempt at a real song. Any feedback would be appreciated. Still definitely a WIP, but I'm not sure what i can do to make it sound better. Still working on vocals, but my voice doesn't do it much justice either. Yeah, so tell me what you think.

http://soundcloud.com/penumbrah/flight-lesson-wip

[Scootalootacris]

Not bad, brony! The lyrics are solid and the hook is there.

Just some quick notes: It seems to be missing some low-end bass, and your lead synths are a little harsh; I'd mix it down a bit and make them a bit less bright. It's also a little hard to hear you, try turning yourself up a bit.

[Penumbrah]

I'll definitely start working on the lower bass and synths. I'll turn up the vocals too. Thanks for your help!