<wip><pony><original> Screw Physics!

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<wip><pony><original> Screw Physics!

Postby colortwelve » 02 Apr 2012 01:25

I do believe this is my first serious attempt at anything even vaguely resembling dubstep (it has a drop, go whine about subgenres somewhere else :lol: ), and it, like everything else I've been working on, will be sent to my vocalist in the near future, but I was hoping I might get a bit of feedback before then.

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Re: <wip><pony><original> Screw Physics!

Postby the4thImpulse » 03 Apr 2012 00:40

The bassline (at :45) is a little to static, boring, and repetitive, It makes me lose focus. The bassline at 1:29 is better but still to static imo. It is a little long feeling in some areas, the drums should be more varied with many more cymbals and hats to fill it in. Keep working at this one I think is has potential to be good.
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Re: <wip><pony><original> Screw Physics!

Postby Freewave » 04 Apr 2012 12:49

I like it a lot. Don't be afraid to let the pony influence shine through though as its barely there. It gets a little repetitive/minimal/long in parts if you wanna nitpick but otherwise well done.
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Re: <wip><pony><original> Screw Physics!

Postby skunkhaseful » 05 Apr 2012 13:37

i can second what the4thimpulse said about the basslines, i rlly enjoy that 1:29 bass line and i guess a track remixed with that bassline more often included and mit more variation build around that specific bassline to support it more would rock hard :D, good job. i like it.
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