<WIP><Remix> Rainbow Factory Multiverse

[MindKog]

I've been sculpting this forever and it's finally almost ready. I would love some critiques on levels or issues I could fix. Even and improvement idea would be greatly appreciated. I'm planning a crazy animated video for this, so I want it to be my best.

http://soundcloud.com/mindkog/rainbow-factory-remix-nearly

[sonikkureinbumu]

at 0:56 to 1:00 the vocals sound out of sync. everything else is perfect.

[DrSorkenstein]

The vocals really bug me, they seem to be a bit out of sync at all times. :/
For me it just breaks the flow of the track completely.

For example at 4:04 the sample comes in a bit too late and is then stretched to fit which sounds VERY weird to my ears.
In the original track the line starts on the fourth upbeat at the end of the progression. I.e on the last 8th note of the bar.

Both the "in" and the "the" are sixteenth notes putting the "rainbow" right at the start of the next bar.

I noticed similar things spread out over the track were a line would come in at the wrong moment and the phrasing of the vocals would clash with the rhythm of the beat.

Might I also make a small suggestion, I think the dash sample would fit the tone a lot better if it was more "devil-ish". Right now it's a bit goofy :/

However, I like were you're going with this! Keep at it!

[MindKog]

As far as the vocals go, I was attempting to mess with them a bit, but as you guys said, it feels off. I think I'm going to strip the track down and remodel it, because I'm really not happy with it. But now I know a few things to change, so thanks!