<nonpony><original><wip?> Kemicol Reaction

[KemicolKid97]

I am 14 years old. This is my first dirty dutch/house. I am not all that great, but I do call my self intermediate/amateur at producing music.
This song is ALMOST done because I may have to fix or fill out any holes. You can give me any suggestions and I will try to apply it to the song,but if i can't, then oh well; but it can't be lyrics.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xmk0PTxIMYM

[the4thImpulse]

The amospeheric effects you have in this song are a good sign or a good producer, nice work on that. All the synths themselves sound very simple and staticm they don't have much character or uniqueness to them (its not the worst thing but it doesn't help the track). The track could use more eqing, espically those drums.

Keep it up