<Pony><Original> Oil In The Sky Factory

[Inkpony]

Instrumental Song.

This is only my second original, but people seem to love it (which blows my mind), so I decided to share with other people.

Got the idea for this song from Rainbow Factory. The idea is supposed to be the 'what happened next' theme. (If you read the Fanfic).

I'm going to eventually stop being lazy and write some lyrics and put vocals to it, but for now, it will remain an instrumental track. All criticism welcome.

Oh and yes, it will sound quite repetitive, but that's only because I set it up to have lyrics. So, sorry about the repetition.
[Edit]: My mistake, uploaded the original cover of the song. Here's the better one. (Two songs put together, by the way)

http://soundcloud.com/reverii/facility-meltdown-oil-in-the

[the4thImpulse]

I like where its going but it needs a lot of work done with the eqing to make it great. It would help if you added more spatial effects to the mix to keep the listener interested while it plays out. I dont like the reverb you used on the snare, it sounds unnatural and forced.

Keep working at this one.