<original><pony><instrumental> Lunar Isolation

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<original><pony><instrumental> Lunar Isolation

Postby DJ Majaro » 16 Mar 2012 00:18



Not much to say to this other than criticism is always welcome.
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Re: <original><pony><instrumental> Lunar Isolation

Postby BassRabbit » 16 Mar 2012 18:18

Mmm, this is pretty good. My analysis is as follows.

The beat is absolutely addictive. It goes 'thump thump thump' just the way I like, but I do have one minor complaint; it's way too quiet.

At first, I was a little worried you were going to use that gated synth as the melody, but then the real melody kicked in. Not only was it a great relief, but the they sync up perfectly.

Those bells at 2:17 are just...butter. Mmm. Transitioned into perfectly and providing the perfect break in all the heavy, ravey goodness.

The way the intro builds into the chorus makes the entire song feel as if Luna is slowly being driven to madness from her isolation, ergo, for technoheads like me, this song perfectly fits the transformation into Nightmare Moon. XD.

All in all, a fantastic track that definitely deserves more attention. Again, I'd make the beat louder, but I won't complain if you leave it alone.

Good job man! I love it!
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Re: <original><pony><instrumental> Lunar Isolation

Postby the4thImpulse » 17 Mar 2012 15:44

The drums seem to slip behind the rest of the track when it really gets going and it loses that huge pumping sound. I would eq the fundemental frequency from the kick out of every other sound in the track and then throw a transient shaper on the whole drum track and give it some attack and release.

Other then that this is a awesome track and its got that 'addictive' feeling to it so thats a plus!
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