<Pony><Original><Electronical-orch> Ponies in the horizon

[DasDeer]

Spacey!

Wanted to create something electronical, but with a couple of orchestral things thrown into the mix! My second time or so actually creating electronical stuff, so any feedback would be appreciated!

[the4thImpulse]

I will be honest and say I dont like the vocals at the beginning (the first 20 seconds) everything else sounds real good, you have a nice mix between orchestra and electronic. I personally think its a little too bright in the upper frequencies (above 5,000Hz).

I like what got here!

[Sgt-Whip (DJQ)]

I feel as though the introduction is too separate from the rest of the song. I don't mean in theme, but that it doesn't fade in to the next sequence as well as it should. The abrupt stop between the intro and the song itself is what causes that feeling for me.

However the song's composition is very nice. The percussion feels a bit out of time with the main melody, but that also strikes me as an artistic liberty you took. Nice high end sounds, though the frequency may be a bit too sharp at around 2:37 and out.

I think a minimalist and drawn out breakdown would do this track wonders, especially to create that vast space feeling in the picture you chose.

That's just me though. Good work overall.

[DasDeer]

Alright, thanks for the feedback!
The intro voice was something i made at the end of the production; it was just something i thought up. It was perhaps a bit too hastly made.
As for the frequency, it is something that i will have to keep in mind.
Thanks again!