My 1st song! Bumps by Lunarz

[lunarz]

http://soundcloud.com/officiallunarz
http://www.youtube.com/user/OfficialLunarz

The same song on both, please leave me feedback or comment.
Any advice or tips are greatly appreaciated too.

P.S. i know it sucks, but its my 1st song, guarenteed i will get better, i want to.

[qJesse]

It seems that the main focus is on the beat. For a starter, I would recommend not trying to make your beat more complex; instead, focus on the melody and it's instruments, and use a simple beat. Were you trying to go for a specific genre when making this? If so, we can probably help you out more if you were going for something. c:

&& Welcome to the amazing world of music! Hope you love it as much as I do! <3

[Freewave]

I will say one of the things that I enjoy abour Brony music is that there often is a context to the music. It references back to a character or a scene of an episode. While I like your avatar and this techno-ish track is pretty cool (and dark) this really doesn't have anything pony related to it. If you can somehow make that relation more visible (either in the track name, using show dialogue samples, or explaining it on your soundclopud page) it makes a world of difference in how people are supposed to appreciate it. Although a LOT of pony music doesn't have words (and is instrumental) with that context you can still tell a story which is an important part of music and making an emotional connection with it.

[lunarz]

Not really, but i wish to make stuff like this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1iUY5ILi6As
Im still new but i am taking all this seriously, i want to become good

[the4thImpulse]

Since this is your first track I take you dont know a whole lot about eqing, it will change your life and make everything sound much better! Here is a tutorial i suggest to a lot of people, watch it and others a keep working on your track.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7HjYskicZRw

I hope it helps, I would repeat what everyone else said in this thread.

[Sarphog]

Sounds like a boss battle from Metroid Prime.. I liked it :3

[lunarz]

Sounds like a boss battle from Metroid Prime.. I liked it :3

Aww cheers ,
I want to create hardstyle, jumpstyle, dubstep, house
Anything electronic tbh, i would really like to create ponystep but i really suck at fl, ive only been using it for like 4 days now, i need teachin ob some shit and im willing to learn
Im sticking ot his too.