<Pony><Remix><WIP> Another BHG remix... criticize please!

[Expy]

http://soundcloud.com/expy/wip-glaze-beyond-her-garden

I figured for once I would put a WIP of my track on on here for everyone so I can change it. I'm actually quite happy with it, but I feel like it's pretty basic overall. I'd like something to separate it from the hundreds of BHG remixes that are out there, but I'm not sure what. Still, I feel like I may as well put it up here and see what you guys think I should do, seeing as I've had some great help from everyone on here so far.

So, how can I improve this?

[MasterOfRegret]

Honestly, I imagined something airy sounding in the beginning. It seems to me like it is just lacking in background. Instead of having silence in the back, add some pads.

[Freewave]

agreed. the pads are some of the best parts on this track. This is just rather bare, flesh it out. The fleshed out part of this track are the best but it takes awhile to reach them.

[Expy]

Added some pads, sounds better now, thanks. I'm thinking it's basically completed, but I want to ask something: Is this different enough from the original to be worth uploading? I'm thinking I haven't changed enough. I don't know...