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<Pony><Original> Luna, It's You

Postby AerieFlew » 27 Feb 2012 21:38

Well I not only wrote by also recorded this a few months ago... I just forgot about it till I went through my recordings today!

Please, any feedback is good.
These lyrics were originally written for Facade but he hadn't used them yet so I figured I could post them finally XD

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Re: <Pony><Original> Luna, It's You

Postby Facade » 28 Feb 2012 08:17

You are getting better keep up the good work!
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Re: <Pony><Original> Luna, It's You

Postby AerieFlew » 28 Feb 2012 09:18

Oi xD thank you hunnie bunnie....
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Re: <Pony><Original> Luna, It's You

Postby Facade » 28 Feb 2012 09:52

Your welcome :)!
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Re: <Pony><Original> Luna, It's You

Postby AerieFlew » 28 Feb 2012 10:20

Gosh you're so cute :)
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Re: <Pony><Original> Luna, It's You

Postby colortwelve » 28 Feb 2012 17:26

I don't usually go for acoustic ballad-esque stuff, but this is nice. That chorus is actually really catchy. Nice work.
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Re: <Pony><Original> Luna, It's You

Postby AerieFlew » 28 Feb 2012 19:40

Well thank you greatly :D
I'm glad you like it :3
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Re: <Pony><Original> Luna, It's You

Postby SeventhElement » 28 Feb 2012 20:12

colortwelve wrote:I don't usually go for acoustic ballad-esque stuff, but this is nice. That chorus is actually really catchy. Nice work.

^this


I'm definitely not for this kind of stuff. I enjoyed it none the less.

Though the complainer in me complains about recording quality, I'm sure it's beyond your control though.
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Re: <Pony><Original> Luna, It's You

Postby AerieFlew » 28 Feb 2012 20:49

Haha yeah the best mic I have is the one IN my iPad..

Thank you though :) I'm gonna try to get a better mic pretty soon.
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Re: <Pony><Original> Luna, It's You

Postby SeventhElement » 28 Feb 2012 20:51

That explains everything then. Built in mics are just the worst things ;_; keep it up though :)
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Re: <Pony><Original> Luna, It's You

Postby AerieFlew » 29 Feb 2012 04:20

Well thank you greatly ^.^ any suggestionso what to do next?
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