<Pony><Original> Shychoactive(shy)

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<Pony><Original> Shychoactive(shy)

Postby Aethralux » 26 Feb 2012 10:17

So just some light floaty dnb I did in the precious few moments I have to myself.
Hope anyone who comes across this enjoys and thats about all I have to say!
(Love comments and criticism if you have any!)

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Re: <Pony><Original> Psychoactive(shy)

Postby colortwelve » 26 Feb 2012 16:31

I don't usually go for all-out 8bit, but this really does pull it off. Seriously, this is beautiful.

Though on the criticism side, the end almost feels like it's building up for a more intense section... So I'd say it's a bit short, not really incomplete, but it feels like it wants to continue.

Still, that's not going to keep me from listening to this a lot more. Very nice work.
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Re: <Pony><Original> Shychoactive(shy)

Postby Aethralux » 26 Feb 2012 22:15

Hah thanks bro, s'good to hear! Though I'm not sure if i could call it true 8 bit. I'd have cheated if that's what i was going for :P
Happy to hear you enjoyed it and i did sort-of feel the same way about the end. I wanted to continue but i didn't want to lose the feel it had by making it to long or repetitive. I'm sure I'll come back to this one from a different angle some day so you may very well hear an extended edit eventually :P
Thanks for the comment! Your feedback is much appreciated ^_^
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Re: <Pony><Original> Shychoactive(shy)

Postby CGEyeGuy » 28 Feb 2012 20:16

colortwelve wrote:Though on the criticism side, the end almost feels like it's building up for a more intense section... So I'd say it's a bit short, not really incomplete, but it feels like it wants to continue.

I agree, I felt like it was going to go into another section that had more power.
This is an awesome track btw
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Re: <Pony><Original> Shychoactive(shy)

Postby SeventhElement » 28 Feb 2012 20:50

A legitimately good liquid dnb track. The above posts illustrate my feelings towards the song, except the drop at :33 or somewhere else in the song needs some kind of sub-ish, sine-ish bass that's not in your face but seriously looming. But that's my two cents though. Otherwise fantastic job!
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