(WIP?)(Nonpony)(Original) New guy here. First music attempt.

[Omnomnomnom]

http://youtu.be/BQMgDFSZwzg

Yeah, it's my first honest attempt at FL studio.
I think it's okay for a first track, though it's obviously nooby (there's like, no variation and very VERY bad mixing. Plus a terrible ending.).

About the terrible audio quality:
In order to sidestep incredibly bad render problems in FL studio (damn you ASIO with your amazingly low latency, yet terrible rendering), I ended up plugging a M/M 3.5mm jack into my mic and headphone ports, and recording the audio straight outta FL studio. In the meantime, it added tons of noise. And uploading to Youtube only made it worse. But still, I'd prefer this static-y thing over the pure sh*tstorm I get when normally rendering.

Let me know what you think!
I'm new here, and overall new to music stuffs, so please forgive me if I've made a faux pas.

[Solarsail]

I liked the first 20s. I think variation should be a higher priority to fix than the technical issues, because it sounded OK as is.

[DasDeer]

Pretty much what Solarsail said.
It sounds good, even tough you recorded it the way you did. Try adding a bit more variation; it can get really cool.

[CGEyeGuy]

Welcome to the forum! Also there is an introduction thread, as Solar Sail and Dasdeer said it needs variation. Sounds good so far, can't wait until it is finished!