<Original><Pony><WIP><Orchestral-Metal-ish> Ruffled Feathers

[DasDeer]

Phew. The last two weeks has been hell for me! Tons of school and tons of stuff do to, but i managed to get some work done inbetween all my school projects.

Soo, this is basically a song for a battle between Rainbow and Gilda. Rather common idea, i know.
This is my first time i actually use guitars, and try to make some sort of solo.
It is almost done, i still have to put some voice samples in, do some mastering and effects. Buuuut, before i do all that, i want to receive some feedback from you guys! What is good, what is bad, what can i improve etc.
Never really done a song like this, so i could use some pointers.

http://soundcloud.com/dasdeer/ruffled-feathers-u

[Solarsail]

It's epic and beautiful. One of my favourites of yours as it is now. The opening buildup from gentle piano to the high energy part was brilliant.

Tiny change you could make: the lead 2.13-2.24 is kind of harsh (melody is fine).

[Lyonize]

Very cool. Sounds kinda like E.S. Posthumus =D

[DasDeer]

Glad you guys liked it, and thanks for pointing that melody out. It is a bit harsh, and i will see what i can do to fix it.