<non-pony><original>Rainy Day Smiles-AerieFlew feat. Facade

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<non-pony><original>Rainy Day Smiles-AerieFlew feat. Facade

Postby Facade » 15 Feb 2012 15:19

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/58232966/Rainy% ... Smiles.mp3
recorded this the other night tell me what you think!
I'm playing guitar and AerieFlew is singing
https://facadeofages.bandcamp.com/album ... o-the-dark
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Re: <non-pony><original>Rainy Day Smiles-AerieFlew feat. Fac

Postby AerieFlew » 15 Feb 2012 15:23

BLAH xD hahaha...

See Facade is Mr. Talent xD just saying....
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Re: <non-pony><original>Rainy Day Smiles-AerieFlew feat. Fac

Postby X-Trav » 15 Feb 2012 15:34

Great going, really cheery song, though there's a few thing you need to work on.

First off, mastering, the guitar is a bit loud and Aeries' voice gets drowned out a few times. The guitar is great! you keep your tone the same and your chord transitions smooth, it just is a little too loud on the mix.

Second Aerie needs to sing a bit more enthusiastically, you have a beautiful voice, but you're shying out on us and its a hard to understand you! SING IT! (post lyrics please).

Third you guys got some mic noise in the background, just some quick eq will fix that right up though!

Fantastic chemistry here, keep going, please!
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Re: <non-pony><original>Rainy Day Smiles-AerieFlew feat. Fac

Postby Facade » 15 Feb 2012 15:57

Thanks man yea I kinda thought so after I posted this so I was like oh well
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Re: <non-pony><original>Rainy Day Smiles-AerieFlew feat. Fac

Postby AerieFlew » 19 Feb 2012 18:49

Well thank you greatly o.o I'll try to sing more um... Let's say it this way. I'll try not to panic when I sing hahaha...

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