<Original><Pony>Turning Pink

[Lyonize]

http://soundcloud.com/simbadj/turning-pink-1

This is my first pony related song. I decided to mess around with a dubstep break. I can't say i'm completely satisfied with it though.

[CommandSpry]

this was very solid

[Lyonize]

Thanks!

[Freewave]

i like this but you need an additional melody added for some much needed complexity. a bit too much reverb too (try maybe some delay instead). that dubstep breakdown is ok but isn't a highlight as it should be. it kinda gets a bit boring after that.

other then that this has some very good potential but just needs some more work.

[Lyonize]

i like this but you need an additional melody added for some much needed complexity.

Complexity wasn't really what i had in mind when I made this though I do think it could have used more complex drums or something. I sort of took a little bit of inspiration from "Young At Heart (Angger Dimas Remix)" by Amy Meredith.

a bit too much reverb too (try maybe some delay instead).

I'll certainly have to try that out.

that dubstep breakdown is ok but isn't a highlight as it should be. it kinda gets a bit boring after that.

This is pretty much my first time messing around with dubstep so I can't say theres not room for improvement. lol After the dubstep breakdown is the outro. It's not supposed to be super exciting.

other then that this has some very good potential but just needs some more work.

Thanks for the feedback! =D