<wip> Untitled (instrumental)

[Plaaay]

http://soundcloud.com/plaaay/untitled-wip-1
Any feedback welcome!
Also, if no one else wants to write some lyrics and sing on this I'll have to try it myself again. In this case, what should the lyrics be about? How does this sound?

[DrSorkenstein]

At first I was like *Head nodding from side to side*
But at 3:20 I was like *Sudden stop of head nodding*

It seems a bit unconnected to the first 3 minuites. They could stand as a song on their own I'd say.
As for lyrics: idonnomakesomethingupitsoundsokaythusfar...
- teaparty with pinkamina leads to death
- hanging out with discord leads to death
- you went into fluttershys shed

[Plaaay]

Well, I wanted the last part to make the listener feel like "WTF just happened? What's going on?". So, yeah, it does sound unconnected to the rest of the song, on purpose.

"... leads to death" You managed to make my day with that
Okay, so in the end someone dies ... sounds good!