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<Original><Pony> Dashie's Dreams

Postby [voodoopony] » 13 Feb 2012 00:20

It took me a few months, and some help from my school's music teacher, but I'm happy it's done.



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Re: <Original><Pony> Dashie's Dreams

Postby LunchBagMusic » 13 Feb 2012 01:35

This is quality stuff. For what it is, it does it really well.

Problem is, it's just a tad boring. It seems as though it was made as a compliment to the video (not vice versa), and only really gets interesting at around 2:40. Unfortunately I'm a stickler for a good melody, so my feedback may be biased.

But what you've got there is really solid. It sounds good and really captures the idea of 'dreams'; very meditative. Good Job!
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Re: <Original><Pony> Dashie's Dreams

Postby bigBerd » 13 Feb 2012 11:26

Damn, this is super-chill. I love it. I could listen to this all day.
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Re: <Original><Pony> Dashie's Dreams

Postby [voodoopony] » 15 Feb 2012 15:00

LunchBagMusic wrote:Problem is, it's just a tad boring. It seems as though it was made as a compliment to the video (not vice versa), and only really gets interesting at around 2:40.


I s'pose the track could use more details. I at least wanted to get a good female singer or a British rapper to do vocals and fill the gaps, but can't find one. Thanks for the listen ^-^
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Re: <Original><Pony> Dashie's Dreams

Postby randomblockfilms » 15 Feb 2012 23:13

how do you? but? Gah... this is so chill! and laid back! its like lounge music or something. your style, its something that i want. very badly. lol. and what's with the trippy video editing in the end?
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Re: <Original><Pony> Dashie's Dreams

Postby Freewave » 16 Feb 2012 19:08

[voodoopony] wrote:
LunchBagMusic wrote:Problem is, it's just a tad boring. It seems as though it was made as a compliment to the video (not vice versa), and only really gets interesting at around 2:40.


I s'pose the track could use more details. I at least wanted to get a good female singer


maybe miu could be free for this. last time i checked her keyboard was broken so maybe she is available. love the laidback vibe (as is in a lot of your works). great atmosphere.
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Re: <Original><Pony> Dashie's Dreams

Postby [voodoopony] » 17 Feb 2012 17:05

randomblockfilms wrote:what's with the trippy video editing in the end?

It's just some kaleidoscope visuals I nicked off Youtube, I thought it'd blend well together with the lofi bits. I kind of wish I got a better one, without that dude in it x[

DJ Pon-3 wrote:maybe miu could be free for this. last time i checked her keyboard was broken so maybe she is available. love the laidback vibe (as is in a lot of your works). great atmosphere.

Thanks, I'll check her out!
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Re: <Original><Pony> Dashie's Dreams

Postby AerieFlew » 19 Feb 2012 23:09

This is so awesome <3 I'm thinking that I should be listening to this constantly lately, chill me out some! Great job. I like the little bit of vocal stuff in it, really makes it interesting.
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