<Pony><Original> Vinyl Dream

[That_One_Dood]

Finished this song for DJ-P0n3, tell me what you guys think. Constructive criticism as always is welcome!

http://soundcloud.com/dave-sager/vinyl-dream

Edit: name

[Freewave]

It's nice & catchy. Could be mastered a bit better as the various instruments do conflict a little and muddy it up. Always nice to hear funk guitar.

PS I prefer the name Dj Pon-3 over Vinyl Scratch. Vinyl Scratch is only the mixing software i use, The press got this very wrong early on and I'm still dealing with the trademark problems ever since. lol

[That_One_Dood]

So should I work on the EQ to make them conflict less? I'm still a kinda new to the whole mastering thing. Much appreciated!

[randomblockfilms]

ahahaa!! i love that funk guitar. wowwuka wown wonkuwuka wown!! LOL

and 1:00-1:30 sounds cool! especially the notes and stuff!

one piece of constructive critizism is that you might want some more dynamics. maybe some more quieter and slower parts and stuff. because now it sounds like its all in the lead mode. (if that makes sense)

and maybe some more bass. heehee. i lovezz bass o.o

[That_One_Dood]

Thanks I'll keep this all in mind when I'm working on my next track, I'm also working on remastering this one.

[Freewave]

So should I work on the EQ to make them conflict less? I'm still a kinda new to the whole mastering thing. Much appreciated!

Yeah I hate mastering too but its something to work on if things get muddled or to many instruments are playing in the same frequency. Choose to lower frequencies on instruments where they aren't helping, may want to pan them into seperate left and right channels too (not completely of course, not like the beatles used to, lol), and don't be afraid of pads (those ambient sounding soft slow synths) and bass.

[bigBerd]

This track is really fun. The synths about a minute in are uplifting, and the track as a whole seems really well thrown together. This sounds like it could be a soundtrack for something, maybe a montage scene in a movie somewhere.