<wip>For The Solar Empire

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<wip>For The Solar Empire

Postby CGEyeGuy » 26 Jan 2012 18:26

http://soundcloud.com/cgeyeguy/for-the-solar-empire-wip2
Working on something a bit more energetic than what I have been doing.
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Re: <wip>For The Solar Empire

Postby Freewave » 26 Jan 2012 18:49

i'd have the drums just a little louder, they are a lil low. kind of a weird kick on those single hits which come in at :34. Obviously try to add some different melodies or a bridge rather than repeating and adding. Otherwise a pretty good start and i look forward to the completed track.
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Re: <wip>For The Solar Empire

Postby CGEyeGuy » 27 Jan 2012 03:27

Thanks for the input! Got a new wip
http://soundcloud.com/cgeyeguy/for-the-solar-empire-wip4

Still a little repetitive in some areas. Some of the frequencies seems to be clashing and mudding it up.
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Re: <wip>For The Solar Empire

Postby Rifftrack » 27 Jan 2012 07:43

I swear I felt like my speakers were going to blow up from 1:00 and onwards. I do like it, seems like something that could generate a lot of remixes when you're done with it! Please continue working on this, so I can remix it :D
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Re: <wip>For The Solar Empire

Postby CGEyeGuy » 27 Jan 2012 09:37

http://soundcloud.com/cgeyeguy/for-the-solar-empire-wip5

Rifftrack wrote:I swear I felt like my speakers were going to blow up from 1:00 and onwards.

Ah yeah, I still need to make it a bit more speaker friendly. Hopefully the adjustments I made helped.


I do like it, seems like something that could generate a lot of remixes when you're done with it! Please continue working on this, so I can remix it :D

Will do! :D I am currently trying out some more melodies to continue where it leads off.
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Re: <wip>For The Solar Empire

Postby Rifftrack » 27 Jan 2012 10:13

Hmm...I listened to that one now, and, I don't know but the Synth at 2:12 and onwards sounds..umm, distorted? Maybe a bit too distorted? I don't know, to me, it's kind of distracting from the rest of the song. Just throwing my 2 cents.

EDIT: Actually, since you dropped the volume of the other stuff, only now I heard that synth line properly and it seemed weird, I really like the viola though.
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Re: <wip>For The Solar Empire

Postby Freewave » 27 Jan 2012 10:48

this is sounding really good now, that's my 2 cents. any chance of a Celestia sample in there once or not likely?
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Re: <wip>For The Solar Empire

Postby CGEyeGuy » 27 Jan 2012 11:27

Rifftrack wrote:Hmm...I listened to that one now, and, I don't know but the Synth at 2:12 and onwards sounds..umm, distorted? Maybe a bit too distorted? I don't know, to me, it's kind of distracting from the rest of the song. Just throwing my 2 cents.

EDIT: Actually, since you dropped the volume of the other stuff, only now I heard that synth line properly and it seemed weird, I really like the viola though.

hmm... I will look into this

DJ Pon-3 wrote:this is sounding really good now, that's my 2 cents. any chance of a Celestia sample in there once or not likely?

At the moment it is not likely, but if I find a place where one will fit then it is highly possible.

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Re: <wip>For The Solar Empire

Postby CGEyeGuy » 28 Jan 2012 06:53

http://soundcloud.com/cgeyeguy/for-the-solar-empire-wip6
How's this?
Around 2:50 onward it is just filler because I don't know where to go from it at the moment.
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Re: <wip>For The Solar Empire

Postby Rifftrack » 28 Jan 2012 11:58

I'm liking it more and more, you should come up with an ending for it, nothing more I can say really, I love it.
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Re: <wip>For The Solar Empire

Postby SeventhElement » 28 Jan 2012 14:24

Awesome stuff :D can't wait for it to be completed.
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