<Remix> Second Chances

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<Remix> Second Chances

Postby MasterOfRegret » 26 Jan 2012 04:04


So ummm. yeah.
It started as an original. But then I changed it. I think it's okay....
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Re: <Remix> Second Chances

Postby CommandSpry » 26 Jan 2012 06:33

You are right, it is okay! Nice job :D

A few things to keep in mind:

- Effects overflow, too much bloated bass without definition

- Too much synths, no sidechanneling

- Barely can hear those drums at some parts, the snare just gets cut off by the overpowering synths. Use a limiter to make the synths reduce the volume rather than the kicks.

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Re: <Remix> Second Chances

Postby Rifftrack » 26 Jan 2012 07:17

Yeah I'm gonna agree with CommandSpry here. Drums can barely be heard sometimes, Singing was okay.
To me, personally this sounded a tad weird, it has potential, but it needs proper mixing.
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Re: <Remix> Second Chances

Postby Aviators » 26 Jan 2012 11:27

Don't bash him for the "okay" singing, that was my fault. xD

Rifftrack wrote:Yeah I'm gonna agree with CommandSpry here. Drums can barely be heard sometimes, Singing was okay.
To me, personally this sounded a tad weird, it has potential, but it needs proper mixing.
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Re: <Remix> Second Chances

Postby Freewave » 26 Jan 2012 11:56

wow this is very... different. i liked the original and i'm all for remixes but i'm not wild about this remix. the mastering is off and the direction and instrumentation is just really strange. some really uncomfortable frequencies sadly due to that. needs a bit of work. :/
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