<Original><Pony> Neverending Strife

[H8_Seed]

A song I wrote about Discord! Listen to it!

http://soundcloud.com/h8_seed/neverending-strife

[Navron]

Nice job! Great blend of distortion, synths, and vocals.

Now onto constructive criticism.

Only criticism I could add would be to lower the volume on the main arpeggiated synth, as (at least for me), it begins loud, stays loud, and becomes an overpowering segment throughout the song.

The loud vocals at the end seem intentional from what I assume, but if they're not, lowering the volume on them a tad bit would help out as well.

Once again, these are relatively minor. Overall the song is excellent.

[MixolydianPony]

I really like the various riffs in the song. I agree with NavyBrony on the main arpeggiated synth, it is indeed too loud. The vocals could be just a touch louder. But overall, I really enjoyed listening to this, and in fact played it multiple times in a row, which is quite surprising as I've never intentionally listened to this type of music before.