<original> One Thousand Years

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<original> One Thousand Years

Postby AdmiralCubie » 16 Jan 2012 15:04



One Thousand Years by AdmiralCubie
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Re: <original> One Thousand Years

Postby randomblockfilms » 16 Jan 2012 23:39

mmm sounds chiptuney and medievalish. but one problem for me is that most the sound is coming from the left side. and the drums are a bit quiet. and maybe add some more instruments that pop in and out, to add variety but other than that it sounds nice!
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Re: <original> One Thousand Years

Postby Solarsail » 17 Jan 2012 14:11

(from the Youtube comment I made)

Much improved from "Sisters". Melodies were good, you changed it up a lot more than before, keeping it interesting. Samples need work but that isn't very important compared to the creative elements.
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Re: <original> One Thousand Years

Postby AdmiralCubie » 17 Jan 2012 15:19

Solarsail wrote:(from the Youtube comment I made)

Much improved from "Sisters". Melodies were good, you changed it up a lot more than before, keeping it interesting. Samples need work but that isn't very important compared to the creative elements.


Excuse my ignorance, but "samples"?
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Re: <original> One Thousand Years

Postby Solarsail » 17 Jan 2012 15:39

The instrument sounds? I'm not a musician, I could be wrong.

I just mean they sound neither chiptuney nor realistic. I don't know which sound you were going for.

Could you also put up a download link?
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