You know I nearly lost the will to live trying to come up with a way to complete this thing. Although there are still a few kinks in how the thing flows from start to finish, I think I've managed to extend myself a bit in terms of the arrangement, and I'm rather pleased.
It begins rather abruptly and the changes don't quite make sense lyrically. If you're going to add full lines then at least cut them at a sensical point. Still though, I really liked it and it's much better then I could ever do.
Hmmm very different, at least you found something new to do with a track that's been mixed to death. I liked how it changed as it progressed and in many ways got more interesting and danceable too. Great job of thinking outside of the box!
EDIT- Actually its kind of funny I played this (and didn't look at who posted it) and though hmm this is cool this is something the Replacer might make. And guess who it is!! Sure enough with all your diverse tracks your style IS to consistently come up with something that sounds good and yet not typical in the least (and poppy).