Riff Track- Quiet Glow Glitch'd

[Rifftrack]

Hello there! Might as well introduce myself since this is my first post on this site. I'm a starting musician and music enthusiast and I've been working on electronic music since the beginning of August of 2011, I'm nothing really great, but I take pride in my work, and everything I do, I do for just plain and simple fun and nothing more. With that said, I've been working on this song for 3 days now and it's for a dear friend of mine who I hold in high respects.
I would really love to know what you all think of it!

http://soundcloud.com/riff-track/quiet-glow-glitchd-up-the-flow

[bartekko]

I liked it. Could be great with a bit of work on transitions. Also, the snare seems snapped.

[Rifftrack]

I liked it. Could be great with a bit of work on transitions. Also, the snare seems snapped.

Thanks! I appreciate the criticism and will consider these points. Thank you so much for replying

[Freewave]

sounds pretty nice, nothing really stuck out in a bad way (which is always GOOD!). Keep up the good work. I liked the panning effects (which a lot of people often forget to play around with). a breakdown would be nice as a brief calm spot inthe middle but otherwise i like what ya got.

[randomblockfilms]

whoa. dat wobble sounds pretty good! maybe a bit repetitive but then again, what song isn't?