Need a bit of help with this one. Any suggestions?

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Need a bit of help with this one. Any suggestions?

Postby SkruffyPony » 19 Dec 2011 21:09

Came up with this the other day in a session. I like it, but know it's lacking something!

Ignore the title, or don't.
http://soundcloud.com/cappoleaf/voodoo-likes-em-mature

Grr...I've been playing around with all kinds of stuff, but it's all sounds wrong. I'm thinking maybe a lead or something, but all the sounds I try don't fit. What would you do? Any feedback?

Thanks!
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Re: Need a bit of help with this one. Any suggestions?

Postby LunchBagMusic » 20 Dec 2011 04:12

It might be my speakers, but I reckon make the bass a little more pronounced.

I also think the drum beat is too quiet for the amount of thick texture it provides. Perhaps a notch louder?

Do both these by only a little. Too much, and you'll ruin the chill nature of the piece. Good job.
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Re: Need a bit of help with this one. Any suggestions?

Postby randomblockfilms » 24 Dec 2011 00:02

maybe you could have a pad in the background that could glue it all together. but i mean it does sound great as is! even if the vocals are a bit repetitive.
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