Mogul Dash - Voyage of Pirate Pip

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Mogul Dash - Voyage of Pirate Pip

Postby MogulDash » 08 Dec 2011 11:50

Here it is. My third original, this one themed towards Pip.

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Re: Mogul Dash - Voyage of Pirate Pip

Postby X-Trav » 09 Dec 2011 09:38

Great song, Love the sounds you have, especially that percussion. (There's something going on in my right ear and i'm loving it!) The repeating "Pip" at 2:20 onward was also VERY well done!

few things too improve on:

The strings at the start sound a little weak and don't slur very well, try lowering the attack.
I'm not entirely sure, but I think I hear some Background music from you vocal samples Theres plenty of places to get a capellas like here
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Re: Mogul Dash - Voyage of Pirate Pip

Postby Freewave » 09 Dec 2011 14:12

Got a real unique sound and approach to it. Vocal samples could be a bit louder but otherwise nice job.
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Re: Mogul Dash - Voyage of Pirate Pip

Postby MogulDash » 15 Dec 2011 01:03

Thanks for the feedback guys.

I agree the source for the vocals could have been better, thanks for the link.
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Re: Mogul Dash - Voyage of Pirate Pip

Postby Overkillius » 15 Dec 2011 03:31

that album art...
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Re: Mogul Dash - Voyage of Pirate Pip

Postby Lethaargic » 15 Dec 2011 15:49

It got really catchy, especially with the Pipsqueek vocals
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