<Nonpon><Original><...Daaance?idk> Sundark Alpha

[NightmareRare]

You should pass the bacon more :)

... Meaning you had some great melodies but because your chord progression was on top the whole time it kinda distracted from it, try automating the volume next time so your melodys can have a turn in the spot light. Other then that I loved your compositon on this one :D well done!