Remix of Aviators Constellations (feedback would help)

[Enigmatic Brony]

I was wondering what you all thought about this remix I did?

[itroitnyah]

The vocals sorta half-sit behind the mix, they're a bit hard to hear and understand. The vocals should probably have a small riser to introduce them at each part and the end, the riser doesn't have to be something huge, but just small to let people know that the vocals are going to enter/exit. I don't really understand why the vocals after 3:50 have risers to introduce them, but the ones at the start don't. The arp that comes in at 0:46 and pretty much the whole part where it plays it too repetitive and that makes it uninteresting to listen to. At 3:50 is the first real change in melody and patterns that I hear, and the song becomes interesting to listen to. The song is good though, I think it was pretty good.

Also, that moment when you realize that your OC in the stars is just a faceless pony with two arches on it's face, lol. Or maybe that's just me noticing that.

[Enigmatic Brony]

Thanks for the feedback defiantly will help with other remix's im working on such as "Rainbow Factory & Beyond Her Garden" and i might go back and fix those few things up just to make the song as perfect as it can be

Thanks again

[VaporBlaze]

I like the general structure of your intro, but it seems to be messing something... Like, there's way to much silence in between the notes, but other than that you have a really good build up.

Unfortunately, it seems like after that, you just stop doing things until 4:10. You definitely need to vary it up, because I skipped around the main section of the song and it all sounds exactly the same. A bass drop, improv solo, glitchy vocals, or something is needed to keep things interesting.

And I definitely agree with itroitnyah that the vocals seem to quiet.

Anyways, you definitely have a solid framework here, but I don't think it stands on its own very well. It needs some things to spice it up.