<nonpony><electro? house> Radio Hammer

[Nine Volt]

YAAAAAAAY
https://soundcloud.com/nine-volt/radio-hammer

So yeah, any feedback would be awesome. Unless it's something like "cool song bro".

[Stakeout Punch]

cool song bro

[Stakeout Punch]

Seriously.

I don't have the experience to really critique, but I can say from an interest standpoint it does keep my attention throughout the song, which is always a plus as I have problems focusing on things. The drop sections are kinda repetitive but they are great and listenable/dance-able so it's not really a problem.

[Genkar]

The reverb sounds a tad bit heavy towards the beginning, but it becomes less noticable once the kick comes in. You could gradually bring up the wet level until the kick comes in, that might help. The breakdown at 1:02 is pretty awesome. Not too big a fan of those hihat samples at 1:15 though, I didn't notice it as much later on though. if you EQ'd some of the high end out it'd be awesome. 1:49 drop could be a lot bigger, I'd recommend making the bass before that a bit lighter, or taking the master down like 1dB during the buildup, and then putting it back up on the downbeat of the drop. It's pretty good though, just build into it better. The bass could probably use a bit more on the high end or mids (that's more preference though). That drop gets a bit repetitive after a little bit. Okay, now 3:45 was a good drop, that was pretty big.

Overall, I actually really liked it, just a few things here and there. Sound design could be a bit better, but for the most part it's pretty good.

[Nine Volt]

The reverb sounds a tad bit heavy towards the beginning, but it becomes less noticable once the kick comes in. You could gradually bring up the wet level until the kick comes in, that might help. The breakdown at 1:02 is pretty awesome. Not too big a fan of those hihat samples at 1:15 though, I didn't notice it as much later on though. if you EQ'd some of the high end out it'd be awesome. 1:49 drop could be a lot bigger, I'd recommend making the bass before that a bit lighter, or taking the master down like 1dB during the buildup, and then putting it back up on the downbeat of the drop. It's pretty good though, just build into it better. The bass could probably use a bit more on the high end or mids (that's more preference though). That drop gets a bit repetitive after a little bit. Okay, now 3:45 was a good drop, that was pretty big.

Overall, I actually really liked it, just a few things here and there. Sound design could be a bit better, but for the most part it's pretty good.

Thanks, yeah I don't think I did well with the initial buildup tbh, I don't know why I didn't EQ out the main bass's bass during that little buildup thing. And the reverb was intended to be heavy on that intro pluck, just to experiment, and if people don't like it I'll stop doing that.

The main reason I threw this out after only a day of work is because I decided that sitting on my songs and not letting people hear them would only delay my advancement in skill.