Thorinair - Spark of Magic (Original Mix)

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Thorinair - Spark of Magic (Original Mix)

Postby Thorinair » 11 Nov 2011 22:27

Hey guys, here is another new track of mine! I somehow forgot to post it yesterday. Oo



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MP3 320 kbps download: http://www.mediafire.com/?rbio37692mahqnk
WAV 1536 kbps download: http://www.mediafire.com/?b8b2sc7l4177co6
Album Artwork download: http://www.mediafire.com/i/?ed14b0177717eqi

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Yay, finally a different intro! Twilight seems to like sending "trance letters" to Princess Celestia! :D

What I like about this track: it sounds a bit different than my previous tracks.
What I don't like about it: it has a slightly too long intro maybe and the melody is played throughout the whole track.

Also, seems I like to produce trance the most! It fills me with great joy to hear all the harmonic melodies. :)

Anyway, Hope you enjoy!

Special thanks to RilDraw (http://rildraw.deviantart.com/) for the awesome Twilight Sparkle vector! :D
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Re: Thorinair - Spark of Magic (Original Mix)

Postby Tsyolin » 11 Nov 2011 22:43

Not to bad.

I really can't judge these "trance" songs considering I don't do any of my own.

However, based off what I heard, the majority of the song is the same chord progression played out in several different ways, but not a ton. It kinda gets repetitive, and it lost my interest after the first few minutes.

I don't mean to offend, because I probably couldn't do any better with my knowledge of techno composition. What I'd reccommend is to try and switch it up a bit more often, and chop down the length of the song by at least a half. 9 minutes is a bit too long for something like this.

Still, keep trying because you can only get better, and I hope to hear some really nice work in the future.
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Re: Thorinair - Spark of Magic (Original Mix)

Postby Thorinair » 11 Nov 2011 23:02

Hehe, thanks! All constructive comments work. Yes, the track is full of the same melody, I know what you mean, and it sucks, I agree. For the next time I will try and add a lot of variety.
About the duration... Most bought professional tracks are 7-9 minutes. :)
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Re: Thorinair - Spark of Magic (Original Mix)

Postby Tsyolin » 11 Nov 2011 23:40

Thorinair wrote:About the duration... Most bought professional tracks are 7-9 minutes. :)


Like I said, I really know nothing about techno composition...
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