<Non-Pony> <Original> <WIP> Spacey

[Masaw]

https://soundcloud.com/masaw/spacey

First song I've made that seems decent enough to publish. Some critique would definitely be appreciated, especially on my mixing and mastering. It also seems a little quiet compared to other songs (even though I probably over-compressed it), but I don't know if that's just me or not.

[Spactrum]

Well the beginning sounds nice, but the bass comes a bit too sudden, I would do a small transition there

The "dubstep" is not very sexy
Make it sexier
It sounds like raping a Nokia

There's also no actual drop.

From hearing I can't say what genre that is.
Anyways, the snare could be a bit more noised and you should choose one main synth, center it and pan the background stuff around it
it also seems a bit repetitive, i would add more variations.

Sidenote: I am no one to actually, logically expect critics from.