<pony><original><EDM> Rainbow Rock

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<pony><original><EDM> Rainbow Rock

Postby SamuraiDanceParty » 18 Jan 2013 00:02

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Re: <pony><original><EDM> Rainbow Rock

Postby FermataWordplA » 18 Jan 2013 19:51

Alright, the build up that starts 1:05. the key the vocals progress on don't really seem to match up with the progression of the instrumentals. It throws me off pretty badly, and I'd personally remake that progression so that it didn't clash so much with the vocals. The drums accompanying the drop at 1:30 are lackluster, especially in contrast to the prior parts of the track, where they were decent. The kick needs more power especially, and I'd clip the tail of the snares just a bit. As it is the snares take up too much room in the mix and are kind of annoyingly prevalent. What I heard.
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Re: <pony><original><EDM> Rainbow Rock

Postby Ruka » 21 Jan 2013 04:00

I found the vocals not quite fitting in to the track itself. And besides, the track seems a little too freestyle to me. And don't get me wrong, freestyle is good. But it was some sort of mix between freestyle and repitition. So like, you've gotta go for one of them.
And the vocal sounds waay to tuned, you should try to fix that.
Over to the drop. The build-up was awesome as shit. But I kinda lost the feeling at the drop because the preset used isn't quite explosive enough (for that kind of build-up). And the drop is a bit too detuned.

But hey, those are just small things compared to how awesome the song was. :D
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