[Pony][Breakcore]Sweetie bot vs R-Dash 5000 (done)

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[Pony][Breakcore]Sweetie bot vs R-Dash 5000 (done)

Postby Ohffy » 28 Oct 2012 15:04

http://soundcloud.com/ohffy/sweetie-bot-vs-r-dash-5000

way too much fun
this my first time mixing and mastering a track i had no idea what i was doing but geez this was fun to make now on to the next one! ^^

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pleases be super mean to this song and criticize the shit out of it especially the mixing & mastering thanks :D
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Re: [Pony][Breakcore]Sweetie bot vs R-Dash 5000 (done)

Postby Hangin' From A Cloud » 28 Oct 2012 18:04

O.O
Now I'm wide awake. That was a helluva seizure trip.
I know next to nothing about breakcore, but is it just drums all the way? 'Cuz I think some melody/chord progs/bassline/synths would do it some good (and not just for sound fx-s). The glitching is good,crazy,over-the-top etc., it fits, but listening to it all the way gets quite tiring.
And panned kicks... I know I would never do that, but here they might just work. Robots trading blows = panned kicks? Maybe...
Oh, and the vocal samples get drowned by the drums. Try sidechaining the drums to the vocals, so when they come in, the drums get quieter and the samples get more prominent.
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Re: [Pony][Breakcore]Sweetie bot vs R-Dash 5000 (done)

Postby Ohffy » 28 Oct 2012 18:39

thanks for the advice cloud i just realized how crazily loud and muddy this was (what was i thinking)
ill have to fix this later today thanks again :D
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Re: [Pony][Breakcore]Sweetie bot vs R-Dash 5000 (done)

Postby Mondogreen » 28 Oct 2012 18:45

Tight as fuck! Definitely taking notes on your drum work.
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Re: [Pony][Breakcore]Sweetie bot vs R-Dash 5000 (done)

Postby Axiqor » 28 Oct 2012 19:59

O.O
That...

was..


O.O
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Re: [Pony][Breakcore]Sweetie bot vs R-Dash 5000 (done)

Postby Ohffy » 29 Oct 2012 04:35

Axiqor wrote:O.O
That...

was..


O.O


Im not really sure if "O.O" is a good thing or a bad thing or a neutral thing mind going into more detail
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Re: [Pony][Breakcore]Sweetie bot vs R-Dash 5000 (done)

Postby Pix31 » 15 Jan 2013 23:06

Awesome!
The mastering could be a little better on the high ends since I felt some bits were a bitch screetchy but it has a great balance overall and its got some awesome effects.
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Re: [Pony][Breakcore]Sweetie bot vs R-Dash 5000 (done)

Postby Ohffy » 16 Jan 2013 19:47

thanks for the feedback i wasn't expecting to get comments on this anymore I'm totally gonna remaster this when i have time

thanks for the comment :D
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