<WIP><Critique><Pony> I'd Smash That(Needs Vocals)

[Nonsense_Profile]

Hey you, I had a really great time last night~

Song Name Not Final EIther...

The Pictures below may be a little iffy... so yeah, if you want I'll remove them or set an external link.

...Anyway, I was in a 'sex' music mood for whatever reason, like usual. and I threw this together a little while ago, starting as just a little... well, I don't know... but I was actually hoping to turn it into a full song... eventually.

Like tomorrow most likely.

(P.S. Mod's I did read the 'review others songs before posting, and I think that's great! right now I am already running late to... something, in fact typing what I'm thinking right now is probably stupid, but I'll review as soon as I can! Hold me to that promise!)

https://soundcloud.com/ridium_music/sexual-feeling-thing-wip-yay-4

I'm not sure how I actually found these pictures now that I think of it but these inspired me to make this song I guess.

First one is on the album artwork so far.



SO yeah, Pone Pone.

Any I seriously gotta go holy shit akhrgl a=rgahrejm

[Conduit]

I like it, here's a few things I would touch up.
-Its really repetitive, especially from 1:14 - 2:00
-The transitions really need work, they're sudden and break up the song.
-The dubsteppy part at the end is a bit weird, but that's fine, just not to my tastes. It is repetitive however, some breaks to a more melodic bit would be nice.