by randomblockfilms » 11 Jan 2013 02:13
ok so right of the bat, the kick sounds a bit weak and sloppy, OOOOOOOHH wait never mind!! LOL. well ok now it sounds maybe a tad bit overpowering? good sample but just a tad bit quieter i think.
build up at 1:00 sounds really good with that piano-ness and the sythn that goes with it too :D but the drop i suppose it a bit out of control sortof. the side chain compression sounds like a little too much. and synths are a bit muddy and blend in with each other. but the little bloops and beeps you got goin on around there are pretty cool :D
and whoa. at 2:13. caught me off guard. lol. but that sounds rather cool and neat and funkeh!! only thing though is that the kick is a bit too loud. grabbing too much attention from the synths, which i feel should be the main focus in that part.
now the ending part sounds a bit good. but again the kick i think is too loud.
and for an over all review sort of thing, it sounds like this could be broken into like 3 (maybe even 4) different songs. you got the trancy part in the beginning, the funkeh dance club thing in the middle (2:13) and the DnB at the end. in a single song, these dont really sound too well but if you took these and added various parts to them with the same feel, you could have 3 different songs.
mahYoutubeChannalTake my advice with a grain of salt as i too am learning how this music stuff works
English is my native language but it is defiantly not my forte.