[Pony][Original][With Vocals] The Chase

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[Pony][Original][With Vocals] The Chase

Postby AndrewClocksin » 08 Jan 2013 14:05

Hey guys! Here's a new vocal song sung from the perspectives of both Pinkie and Rainbow Dash in a scene from my fanfiction, where they go for a quite eventful run in the Everfree Forest.

Let me know what you think!

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Re: [Pony][Original][With Vocals] The Chase

Postby AdamTh3Walker » 08 Jan 2013 14:24

This is right up my alley - dreamy and cute but almost bittersweet. I love it!
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Re: [Pony][Original][With Vocals] The Chase

Postby AndrewClocksin » 08 Jan 2013 15:18

AdamTh3Walker wrote:This is right up my alley - dreamy and cute but almost bittersweet. I love it!


Sweet! A comment like that means a lot coming from you. Thanks!
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Re: [Pony][Original][With Vocals] The Chase

Postby Patashu » 09 Jan 2013 17:19

This is good. Have you tried recording yourself more than once and harmonizing over yourself? If vocals are your strength, after all, you should leverage that to the fullest extent!
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Re: [Pony][Original][With Vocals] The Chase

Postby Conduit » 09 Jan 2013 23:58

The vocals get a little overpowered by the rest of the song in this, not too bad, but it could be improved.
The backing track is nice though. Good work :D
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Re: [Pony][Original][With Vocals] The Chase

Postby Freewave » 10 Jan 2013 15:44

Not wild about the drums and some double tracking harmonizing on the vocals as recommended before would help. Would love it to be a little bit less synthetic and a bit more dreamy (get some reverb in there) but a self-realized track it is and it's a cool idea to build vocal music into a fan fiction concept. Props. ;)
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