<nonpony><clothstep> Cut From Cloth <now a wip>

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<nonpony><clothstep> Cut From Cloth <now a wip>

Postby Nine Volt » 04 Jan 2013 18:23

https://soundcloud.com/nine-volt/cut-from-cloth

I don't know what this is.

What am I doing.

Also first 2013 song.

So basically I have no idea what I was doing with this song. Total project time is estimated at maybe 6-7 hours of work spread over three days (goddammit Reason y u no let me view number of hours one songs)

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Re: <nonpony><clothstep> Cut From Cloth

Postby TheMalenEst » 04 Jan 2013 18:35

Hmm. I think something is missing but i can't put my finger on it.
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Re: <nonpony><clothstep> Cut From Cloth

Postby itroitnyah » 04 Jan 2013 19:12

This is pretty interesting. Now, for the drop, you dun goofed. Big time. Where's the subbass? If it's there, then I guess it doesn't have much of an effect, or it's just really really quiet. The drop is emptier than a homeless guys stomach. It's hard to explain how empty the drop is, it's just really too empty. I'm not sure if it's because the subbass is missing or isn't prominent enough, or the low mid frequencies are just gone, or what, but it is really barren up in the drop. And the melody that the one pretty much ineffective lead bass synth you have playing at the drop is really awkward, it's incomplete and sounds bleh. And the white noise risers you have at various parts of the song to introduce certain parts are really ear shattering-ly sharp, and hurt to listen to
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Re: <nonpony><clothstep> Cut From Cloth <now a wip>

Postby Nine Volt » 04 Jan 2013 21:22

Blegh, you guys make me WIP this song up :P

I really don't know why I decided to release it, I knew something (or everything) needed to be fixed with the drop, I just kinda went "eh, fukkit" and threw it out there.

I thought the risers were just fine though, not sure why you thought they were overly sharp.
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