<Non-Pony><WIP><Original> Ruka - Shiina WIP Feedback?

[Ruka]

So I'm currently trying out the electronica genre and this is my progress so far. doesn anyone have any feedback or any tips on how I can turn this into a full song?
https://soundcloud.com/djm3lody/ruka-shiina

[meletric]

Good work so far! I really enjoy this!
I would however recommend giving the kick a bit more boom and bringing it up a bit, as right now it's getting almost completely drown out by the synths. It might be personal preference, but I also think the snare could use some more snap to it.

Right now the same drum loop is playing throughout its entirety. Perhaps some variation on the drum line would help prevent it from getting stale and add some subtle variety to the build up?

As far as continuing the song goes, it seems that what you have so far is building up to something. For your next move, you could try figuring out a climax to follow that build up.

I hope that helps!