<Industrial> NegaNote & Pinkie's Hacksaw - Barely Hanging On

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<Industrial> NegaNote & Pinkie's Hacksaw - Barely Hanging On

Postby NegaNote » 01 Jan 2013 03:13

http://soundcloud.com/neganote/barely-hanging-on

Some trancey industrial song thing. What do you guys think? Feedback is appreciated and encouraged :D
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Re: <Industrial> NegaNote & Pinkie's Hacksaw - Barely Hangin

Postby vaceslav » 01 Jan 2013 07:34

I'm going to leave the mixing alone , because there's nothing I could say that hasn't been said already.

I enjoyed this, but the biggest issue I had was the lack of space. It seemed everything had a delay or a reverb on it, and it just kind of ended up a little, mushy maybe. Possibly throw in a pad or something if you still feel you need something to fill the gaps. I think a few of the synths were quite similar to each other, which could have added to the confusion between melodies.

And that hihat sample. The second one to come in. Lordy. It's not too noticeable with everything else going, but in the intro it really stuck out badly.
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Re: <Industrial> NegaNote & Pinkie's Hacksaw - Barely Hangin

Postby NegaNote » 01 Jan 2013 11:33

The reasons for this are that when Pinkie's Hacksaw gave me the stems to mix the song, all of the drums were in one stem (drum machine), and all of the synths already had reverb/delay effects on them. It'd be much better if this wasn't the case.
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