Twilight Sparkle's Magical Journey Through the Universe

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Twilight Sparkle's Magical Journey Through the Universe

Postby AClassyPony » 31 Dec 2012 17:57

I hadn't made a song in a while because I've been so busy with school, but I was finally able to throw something together. As far as the actual song goes I think my others are a bit better, but I did use a lot of effects and things that I hadn't tried before, and I also spent a fair amount of time mastering this, so I think it still sounds pretty cool.


https://soundcloud.com/starsong-acp/twilight-sparkles-magical
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Re: Twilight Sparkle's Magical Journey Through the Universe

Postby vladnuke » 31 Dec 2012 18:19

It's a bit bare, don't you think?

I mean, it could use some pads, and some more instruments.

The bass could be a little less muddy, I mean, you either gotta make it more distorted or more clear, just keeping it inbetween like that is making it muddy. Layer a sub on it.

The constant crash is a bit annoying.

Switching to a slower part could help with variation.

Really, your structure could use a bit of work.

Just some stuff to think about for your next song.
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Re: Twilight Sparkle's Magical Journey Through the Universe

Postby AClassyPony » 31 Dec 2012 22:43

Yeah, I couldn't quite get the bass to sounds exactly like how I wanted it to, but I'll keep all that in mind, thanks for the input!
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