<Pony> <Original> Adamth3walker and Spypie - Flightcamp

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<Pony> <Original> Adamth3walker and Spypie - Flightcamp

Postby SpyPie » 29 Dec 2012 19:29

http://soundcloud.com/page-fortysix/adamth3walker-and-spypie

Me and Adam finally collab'd, I really love this one, and I think it came out really well <3.

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Re: <Pony> <Original> Adamth3walker and Spypie - Flightcamp

Postby SpyPie » 30 Dec 2012 13:20

(bump :s)
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Re: <Pony> <Original> Adamth3walker and Spypie - Flightcamp

Postby Magnitude Zero » 31 Dec 2012 14:18

Oh, fuck me. I typed this whole review and then clicked the Soundcloud link to go download the song before actually posting it. I'll give you the short version.

The pad in the beginning is, to put it bluntly, a little bit irritating and the piano melody starting at 0:39 sounds kinda flat and unrealistic.

Everything else is awesome. Clarinet in the middle section is awesome. Sax gave me the happies. Transition to glitchy section was sudden but it works. Glitchy section itself is really wonky and cool. Dissonant, too, which I don't normally like but you pulled it off. Outro with the temple blocks (or whatever they are, they sound like temple blocks) is a really nice touch.

Now I'm going to click "submit" and THEN download, like the reasonably intelligent human being that I am apparently not.
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Re: <Pony> <Original> Adamth3walker and Spypie - Flightcamp

Postby vladnuke » 31 Dec 2012 18:24

Yeah, I could see what you mean by a bit irritating, but I wouldn't toss it out completly, just eq the higher stuff out of it. The first piano could use a patch switch.

Kinda of a jazzier BOC.

The glitchy section could use a lot of work, it should be pitched to the rest of the song, not completely random, just glitchy. I think that would sound a whole lot better and would fit into the theme of "jazzy".
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