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[Ruka]

So I'm not very wise within dark electro. It's like my first try. So anything constructive that I can work on is appreciated! :3

https://soundcloud.com/djm3lody/erektrao-wip

[vaceslav]

I liked the overall feel of this track, and am really interested in seeing a later version, two things though...

The bass synth in the intro is a little loud and overpowering. It felt about right to me at 0.06.
And the synth that fades in at 0.17 has something funny going on with it's timing. Does it have an arpeggiator that isn't synced to the track maybe?

[Nonsense_Profile]

I keep waiting for some kind of drop... but there isn't a drop... or it is? just a very weak drop, kick up the the bass a little, also maybe take out a little re verb possibly?

and just saying but I heard this song like (not literally) a hundred time's before, maybe you heard of it? it's called every open to dutch house and electro ever? it's pretty popular.

[Twy]

I pretty much agree with vaceslav completely. Bass synth seems a bit loud, and the 0:17 synth does have some weird arpeggiator-ness going on. Some of the notes seem on time, but a lot of the quicker ones feel like they aren't.

Also, I think having a slightly louder snare might be something to consider.

Sorry if that's not really too helpful since I'm pretty much repeating vacelav... but good luck with the track!

[Ruka]

I keep waiting for some kind of drop... but there isn't a drop... or it is? just a very weak drop, kick up the the bass a little, also maybe take out a little re verb possibly?

and just saying but I heard this song like (not literally) a hundred time's before, maybe you heard of it? it's called every open to dutch house and electro ever? it's pretty popular.

Yeah ik. But since I'm new to making music: I want to try out a lot of different genres, and this time it randomly was one of those annoying repetitive dutch electro stuff ~

I pretty much agree with vaceslav completely. Bass synth seems a bit loud, and the 0:17 synth does have some weird arpeggiator-ness going on. Some of the notes seem on time, but a lot of the quicker ones feel like they aren't.

Also, I think having a slightly louder snare might be something to consider.

Sorry if that's not really too helpful since I'm pretty much repeating vacelav... but good luck with the track!

I'll look into the arp-stuff and the snares shall be fixed!



Thanks for feedback! ^^