[Dubstep][VIP] Element of Loyalty.

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[Dubstep][VIP] Element of Loyalty.

Postby Eros » 08 Dec 2012 18:39

I was looking for some feedback.

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Re: [Dubstep][VIP] Element of Loyalty.

Postby Penumbrah » 17 Dec 2012 19:20

I like the melody you've got going! Those wubs are very nice too! There were just 2 things I noticed after listening to this a few times.
I personally am a fan of hard hitting kicks and yours seemed to be a little drowned out in the mix. A little more compression along with some EQ cutting out some of the lower frequencies where it sits could help bring that out more.
Another little thing was the drop itself. Wobbles and everything sounded great, but the first note seems out of place. I don't know if that was your intention or not, but It would definitely flow even better with a note in the same key. From what I hear, it sounds like a C minor, A♭ major, E♭ major, and B♭ major chord progression. The initial B note just doesn't fit anywhere within those and it just feels weird to listen to.
As I said before, I like your sound, but I just think those things previously mentioned could improve it. Hope this helped and keep on doing what you do! :)
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Re: [Dubstep][VIP] Element of Loyalty.

Postby randomblockfilms » 18 Dec 2012 11:20

I would agree with most of what Penumbrah said but the part with the first note on the drop, i kinda like how it is out of key. because its like there is this peaceful flow then out of nowhere WEWEWEWEEW WUUGHB WUGBH EEEEEEEEE which is what dubstep is suppose to be like. crazy out of tune electronic screaming.

but yeah the kick is kinda quite. if you need good kick samples go to Freesound.com and just search for kick. i always feel my kicks are horribly quite and weak so i often go there a lot. :P but you still gotta mix them properly into your song.. freesound has some nice kicks in there but they can often get a bit too crazy.
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