by Elmorya » 29 Nov 2012 07:44
The only thing i can really think of is that the kick and snare don't really seem to fit with the rest of the song.
Try just listening to the song with the percussion muted and figure out what kind of sound you want then go find something that matches.
Also the song seems kind of long, there isn't enough variation in the song to keep it interesting for the full 4 minutes
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