by vladnuke » 26 Oct 2012 22:35
Woah, this is some new shit I haven't heard from you, lemme check this out...
lol the rap is kinda stilted.
Songwise, it's pretty nice. Calm and pretty. Idk about that openish hat, seems a bit out of line with the rest of the track
lol warbly voice out of tune.
lol muddled
I'm just doing this SOC, not really moderating or anything, too much College Ass for that.
A few chords don't really fit tonally.
The piano is really nice, I love the grain on that, whatcha use?
I still can't let the vocals go. 6 min mark he gets a little bet- and then 6:30 he gets back to warbly lulz
Ide. Bro. Diaphragm. Use it. Get some bass in your voice. No need for nasaly warbly american-style singing.
Overall, the song was nice, a good backing track.
Ide. Please. Try not to sing sitting down, your lungs have no room to move in that position. Get your nose out of the equation.